Today I presented a piece that I wrote last week. Overall I would say that I am very happy with the outcome. The piece features a very simple melodic line which is developed and contrasted. It is only a page and a half in length and i feel that this piece is is the most consistent thing I have written. One idea, it does not over state itself, it does not exist longer than it should.
Some comments I received,
- mm. 16 - 19 - I feature a passage in the bass clef. This is the only instance that this low register is used in the entire piece. Perhaps I could find a more effective way of creating a thicker texture while still sticking to the upper registers.
- The 5/8 passages were good!, But do not sound like 5/8 at all
- Pause at mm. 39 could be extended. This would play with the listeners expectations
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