Some comments I received on the second piece I wrote, the first in the suite.
- at measure 22, the entire mood changes, a lot of new colors are introduced. perhaps I could introduce this sooner
- I am using consistent intervals
- The entire third system could be expanded and developed more. Possibly use acceleration? Only two notes are sounding for 4 measures. Acceleration could give this passage another dimension
- Fix tempo markings
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